2010년 4월 29일 목요일

Friendship

Dear reader:
This series of writing is made of for different forms of literature, free-verse poem, expository paragraph, haiku, and picture poem on the topic "Friendship." These are based on the thoughts that I had recently while reading books and watching movies. I hope you like them!

8-sentence expository paragraph

Everyone has a different aspect about friendship. Some people say that friends are the ones we spend the most time together, while some say that friends are the ones that stays with us during hard times. In fact, there have been many quotes by famous people who left their definition about friendship. For instance, one greatly respected Chinese writer said, “Sometimes you put walls up not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down.” This writer thought that friends are the ones who care about us. Moreover, in the story “Winnie the Pooh,” one of the characters quotes,”If you live to be 100, I hope I live to be 100 minus 1 day, so that I never have to live without you.” The writer of this story thinks that friendship is everything. Again, everyone has a different aspect about friendship. There is no right or wrong answer, and I think that we can truly respect friendship when we can find our own meaning in friendship






Free verse poem


Possibilities

Friendship is like a piece of soft clay

with a gentle touch by the tip of our fingers,

It changes shape,

to its endless possibilities.

With the beating heart and blushing cheek,

it turns into love.

With the comforting words,

it turns into heart-warming medicine.

If we use our own original touch,

friendship will transform

into endless possibilities





















Haiku




New start








Cherry blossom blows

The final school year begins


New friendship begins









Picture poem



The Balcony





























This is where a young lady stood.
Where Juliet stood.


This is the place where she prayed.
Where she prayed for unfortunate love.

This is where she listened,
and heard the sound of bushes howling.

This is where she looked down,
and saw her only destined love.

This is the place where she waited,
waited for Romeo to climb up a tree to
see her.

This is where she promised,
promised her only love to stay with her forever.

This is the one and only balcony.
Where forever lasting friendship in the name of love began.







Self assessment:

1. This was my first time writing a multi-genre essay, so I looked at other students' blogs to get the picture of what I was doing. Therefore, I might be lacking some originality. I will try other techniques later on if I have the chance.

2. This was also my first time writing a haiku, and I used the word "cherry blossoms. " I don't think any of us can understand this. The school year in most Asian countries begin in March, when the cherry blossoms start blowing. I used it to express the beginning of new experience.

3. I had a hard time trying to fit in a writing related to Romeo and Juliet. I managed to somehow use it in the picture poem, but I think some people might find it difficult to feel the same way as I do about endless friendship being love.

2010년 4월 20일 화요일

Essay 20

Jeffrey Cho
English8-B
Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Final draft for grade
Family.

There is a saying goes. "Blood is thicker than water." I have been away from the rest of my family ever since I was ten years old. Five years away from my parents and my brother might have weakened our relationship. However, instead of dimming our relationship, we developed a special kind of love between each other. In the book "Romeo and Juliet," I saw a similarity between the bond of Romeo and Juliet and the bond among our family members.


One thing that I really admire about my family is the fact that we are so united. Although this might sound ironical, my family live separately. My father and my younger brother live in Seoul because of the quality of education my brother can get in Seoul. My mom lives in my hometown, Seosan, with my grandmother because she has to take care of the restaurant. Finally, I live in the United States, as you can see. However, our family is always united over time and space. We occasionally live for weeks without calling each other or mailing each other, but we still trust one another to do what they need to do. Without trust, my mom would never have let my dad take full care of my little brother. Without trust, my dad would never have let my mom take full care of our restaurant. Our family might be away physically, but we were, and we will be together no matter where we were.

In the book, "Romeo and Juliet," the main characters show this kind of unity that I admire in my family. Romeo and Juliet are born in families that absolutely despise each other. Nevertheless, they fall in love at first sight. Due to the cold atmosphere between the two families, Romeo and Juliet had no choice but to be apart. However, as my family love and trust each other completely even if we live far away from each other, Romeo and Juliet's love is invincible. In one part of the book, there is a part where Juliet says, "What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet." This shows Juliet's unconditional and unchangeable love toward Romeo. I believe that my family's love for each other is just as inflexible as Romeo and Juliet's love.

My family members might not spend as much time together as other families do. My family members might not have as much conversation as other families do. However, I can firmly declare that our invincible, consistant love and trust toward each other will not lose to any other families; Not even to Romeo and Juliet.





Self assessment:

1. On first draft, I confused Juliet's line with Romeo's, so I think I should research my resources more carefully next time.

2. I still have some trouble trying to use different words for the same meaning. I should use thesaurus more often.

3. I think writing intro and conclusion after the body paragraphs got a little more natural. I believe I will get better as time passes

2010년 4월 14일 수요일

Procrastinator

Oh, when I sit on my bed

with my laptop on my pillow,

I feel like I could stay there for 40 days and 40 nights.

But everything has to come to an end...

the avalanche of homework

forces me out of my little heaven

Wait!

I can probably finish this homework in two hours!

So I am going to stay and chat with my friends until 8:00 pm!

hours which felt like seconds pass and it is finally homework time.

Wait again!

I will go to bed at 12:00 pm tonight so I can play a little more.

time ticks and I finally started my homework.

Something feels weird

I thought I was doing my homework but it was actually a dream!

alarm rings and I wake up only to realize that I am in BIG trouble

2010년 4월 8일 목요일

Essay 19

Jeffrey C (There is lyric on another page)

4/08/2010

Final draft
Ever since I got my first ipod 4 years ago, I became really interested in music. I started out with the songs that were popular at that time. However, I realized that these kind of songs' fame only lasts for about three months before they are forgotten. I looked for songs that will remain as my favorite song for a long time and figured that if I knew a story behind a song, I might be able to enjoy the song with more interest. "God knows" is the song that I consider a masterpiece.

"God knows" is a theme song of one of my favorite anime movies by a Japanese singer named Aya Hirano. This song is about a girl that is too unique. Because she was so unique, she always felt lonely and could not even talk to one boy that she liked. This song is really special to me because I also felt lonely because I had such different school life from everyone else. F0r example this one part of the song, "On the lonely rail" reminded me of the time when I had a hard time trying to live in another country without any relatives. Also, I had to transfer to another school every year, which made it hard for me to make close friends. However, this song ends by saying, "I'll follow you, no matter where you are at the darkness of this bitter. Because you will be shining." The lyrics of this song always cheers me up because when I think about it, I always had someone with me.




It seems to me that most modern music is focused too much on exiting beats and popularity. Although those songs are fun to enjoy for the moment, but they cannot be memorable if there is no meaning in them. I want to encourage everyone to recognize the true beauty of having special meanings in songs that we listen to.





Self assessment:

1. I am not used to writing the introduction and conclusion after writing the body paragraphs first, I find it hard to keep the essay consistant.

2 I had some difficulties trying to translate the Japanese lyrics into English because the words and grammer seems to be ignored in some part of the song, but I think I did well on that.


3 I am going to have to work on paraphrasing words and sentences that are repeated multuple times in one essay because it is awkward to see the same phrases over and over again

God Knows - Lyrics [Hirano Aya]

乾いた 心で驅け拔ける

ごめんね, 何もできなくて

痛みを 分かち合う ことさえ

あなたは 許してくれない

無垢に生きるため 振り向かず

背中向けて 去ってしまう God Lonely Day

私, ついて行くよ

どんな辛い 世界の 闇の中でさえ

きっと, あなたは 輝いて

越える 未來の果て, 弱さゆえに

魂, 壞されるように

My Way 重なるよ今

二人に God Bless。

遠向けて 熱くなる 思いは

現實 溶かして さまよう

合いたい 氣持ちに 理由わない

あなたへ あふれ出す Loving you。

せめて, 美しい 夢だけを

描きながら 追いかけよう For Your Lonely Heart

やめて, うそは あなたらしくないよ

目お見て これからのことを 話そう

私, 覺悟してる

暗い 未來だって, 强くなって

運命, 變えられるかもね

My Wish かなえたいのに

すべては God Knows。

あなたがいて, 私がいて

外の人は 消えてしまった

淡い 夢の 美しさを 描きながら

傷痕, 撫ざる

だから 私, ついて行くよ

どんな辛い 世界の 闇の中でさえ

きっと あなたは 輝いて

越える 未來の果て, 弱さゆえに

魂, 壞されるように

My Way 重なるよ今

二人に God Bless。