2010년 5월 24일 월요일

4) When this happens, many people try to convince themselves that they could not do anything about it, that it was all a destiny. - This I believe, May 18th.

I liked this sentence because I repeated that word "that" in order to provide extra explanation on the sentence before.

5) However, a poet by the name of Naomi Nye and I disagreed with this madness. - Essay 22, May 6th.

This was one of my favorite sentences in the essay 22 because I liked how I wrote "Naomi Nye and I," which made the author seem more friendly to the reader.

6) One thing that I really admire about my family is the fact that we are so united. Although this might sound ironical, my family live separately. - Essay 20; Family, April 20th.

This was one of my favorite sentences just because I got to use the word "ironical." I have always felt that ironical is a very interesting word to use, and was looking for a chance to use it in one of my essays.

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