I chose this sentence as one of my favorite sentences because it was the first time I used a quote. I realized that quotes can be great for introduction paragraph.
2) However, I was in a really severe mental stress because of the fact that I was stuck in that place, when I should have been spending time with my friends. - Forgive, March 11th
I chose this sentence because it was a sentence when I explained the situation further with the "when I should have been spending time with my friends" part. I felt that this addition added a nice description to my paragraph.
3) I do not believe in destiny. ~ I believe in neccesity. - This I believe, May 18th.
These two sentences are paired up. I liked these sentences because I thought that ending a paragraph with one statement and starting the next paragraph with a similar sentence structure gave it an excellent flow.
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